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Author Topic: Trying to write something more substantial (3 songs within)  (Read 1629 times)
SJ Zero
Been there, done that
Posts: 1211

« on: June 20, 2005, 12:33:02 AM »

This is my first, second, and third try to move my midi songs to something more substantial using fruityloops.

SJ Zero - New Trauma
SJ Zero - Jeremy
SJ Zero - Zero

The last one is definitely the best, imho.
Radical Raccoon
I hold this place together
Posts: 914

« Reply #1 on: June 20, 2005, 06:00:28 AM »

The first one (New Trauma) sounds good. The second one feels like it's missing something, maybe some strings in the background or some type of bass. The 3rd one (Zero) is too boring. You should add some more stuff into it or have it transist into a different section of the song and then back out or into another, but that's just my opinion.

Wandering Guru
Posts: 334

« Reply #2 on: June 25, 2005, 09:11:39 PM »

First one is very good for a first attempt. I think this one is the best of these three.

Second one: I agree with Radical Raccoon, you should put in some bass which follows the rhytm of the bright whistle thing.

Third one is imo not the best one of these three, it needs some more to it.


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