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Author Topic: Rockuman's Art of 0wnage *now scanned!*  (Read 5230 times)
Rokkuman
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« on: March 02, 2004, 11:01:17 PM »

It's a fighter guy with a headband in a pose. I went for anatomy and posing in this one. The face is hard to make out, but it sucks, so don't try anyway...

I am asking for CRITIQUE. Homosexual replies like "It's bad", "it is fun", or "it looks like a girl" will not be tolerated, and upon posting such, you will be torn apart by me in the PMs, OR in the middle of the thread.

Enjoy... ^_^

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« Reply #1 on: March 02, 2004, 11:21:05 PM »

god, don't take this personal...

first off, Needs to be a bit more praportional(?sp).  second, the feet are a bit too big.  can anyone say abbs, pecks, or belly button? Cheesy
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« Reply #2 on: March 02, 2004, 11:45:05 PM »

It's bad
it is fun
it looks like a girl
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« Reply #3 on: March 03, 2004, 12:31:52 AM »

i didn't think it was that bad...  Tongue

feet too long, little detail.  reminds of cheap anime  :lol:
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« Reply #4 on: March 03, 2004, 12:36:03 AM »

I know nada about art, but here are my thoughts:
1) Feet are a little too rounded at the tips.
2) I guess it's hard to tell, due to the blurriness, but the fists seem a little too much like just spheres. Make them flatter.
3) What's that splotch in the top-lef of the chest?
Otherwise...Wow...I wish I could draw like that...
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« Reply #5 on: March 03, 2004, 12:45:19 AM »

it looks like rock lee
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« Reply #6 on: March 03, 2004, 12:50:02 AM »

has a ranama feel to it. must me the hair
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« Reply #7 on: March 03, 2004, 08:46:06 AM »

For all of you talking about chest and abs and stuff, he's wearing a shirt. Because of the extreme blurryness, it's nearly impossible to make out the folds and whatnot. The little splotch on his chest is a symbol that means absolutely nothing..

As for the hands, I'm sure they're a little off, but they're extremely blurry, and more than just "spheres". I can tell you that...

The feet, eh. I guess I'll work on those...

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« Reply #8 on: March 04, 2004, 05:12:30 PM »

Careful on the feet, they're a little off as far as angle goes.  I dont have too much suggestion for that except "play around with it, because I always have to do that for hands and feet.  His pelvis/hips and arms seem a little small, but other than that it either looks fine or too blurry to notice any mistakes.  I love the ribbons!

As for hands, I like to draw the palm, and then the fingers, the palm being something like a flimsy box with rounded edges.  Whenever I try and draw a hand straight out it's always too small and looks like he dipped it in acid and it shriveled up Smiley

Anyways, good stuff Smiley  It's nice to know there are people out there with the affinity for cheesy fighting games that I have Cheesy
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« Reply #9 on: March 05, 2004, 05:03:04 PM »

I'd say the feet are fine, if he's standing on a hill or starting to float in the air.
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« Reply #10 on: March 05, 2004, 06:02:42 PM »

It looks nice, and I admire you'r effort to get it into the computer :lol: .
C&C: I think it looks like the arms dosn't really have the same
length and thinckness.
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« Reply #11 on: March 06, 2004, 02:06:50 PM »

Alright!!! I got the image scanned! Scroll to the top to take a look at the high resolution version! ^_^
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« Reply #12 on: March 06, 2004, 02:23:27 PM »

looks to me like the right leg and arm are out of proportion with their counterparts. but also the left foot is kindof wierd
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other than that it looks good
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« Reply #13 on: March 06, 2004, 03:08:29 PM »

Here's a new one. I went for an actual pose this time...
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« Reply #14 on: March 06, 2004, 04:38:09 PM »

looks like shes going 5Gs.

the left foot is dislocated, the right leg from the knee down is also dislocated and same goes with the left arm elbow and on.
the fingers are crooked and too small.
needs more of a chin too. and the hair comes of the neck. and if she's 'flying' then her bangs wouldn't be flat infront
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